Not enough text and many pictures. explain the reasons you had the pictures and the difference between then and now.
Bruno- mind map was unclear but the presentation helped with a better understanding.
I will use the feedback from this board meeting to improve my presentation and make it clearer for the clients to understand, by describing each slideshow clearly and adding annotations to them for the client to have a better understanding, also I will make the mind map clearer to understand by adding more writing to explain each section and also add more pictures as a visual aid for my presentation
Your mind map is detailed and thoughtful. you need to now add more commentary to this post on how you will use the feedback to refine / change your ideas. Also you need to upload Tasks 1b (proposal), 1c (legal / ethical), 1d (page layout)
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