Evaluation

The research that i conducted was helpful because i had gained more knowledge of what i was writing and it help me with my facts and statistics.researching other published products had given me inspiration of my layout and they style of writing for my target audience. The feedback that i had received from my peers and my teacher  helped me on what I needed to change for it. The changes i made were adding more information on both of my posts and making it clearer for the audience to understand. drafting and redrafting my work helped me make improvements and make my work clearer.